Little Blue Fox's poems.

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Little Blue Fox.

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10th Jul 2004 at 12:14 pm

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
I am sorry they are really silly and pretentious, sometimes.


"Un-titled".

Forget the face,
See just the shadow,
On the tip of your tounge,
On the edge of your sight,
Forever tomorrow.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

Little Blue Fox.

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10th Jul 2004 at 12:17 pm

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"qoud pereditum est"

what was lost,
will again be found,
broken butterfly symmetry,
without any sound,
the fragility of a soul,
flashing through my eyes,
blonde identity blossoms,
smudged but still true,
feelings through my heart,
where then again to start.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

bob fletcher

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10th Jul 2004 at 9:53 pm

bob fletcher - woop woop

woop woop

 
i really liek the first one...isn ice and simple, it doesn't declare one single point yet to a reader it defines something

smudged but still true,

i liek this line from your other one
you are love to me, an epiphany,
you set me free and let me be
and one day i'll be love back for you
and you can know what it feels like too.

learrggh

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6th Aug 2004 at 2:41 pm

learrggh -

 
I likes these poems.

Insert sanity here

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8th Aug 2004 at 8:18 pm

Insert sanity here - Flee from the truth

Flee from the truth

 
Your poems are good
i like them
plain and simple for those of us who cant be bothered to concentrate
straight to the point
very good
Burn burn the truth, the lies, the news
Burn burn the life that you cant choose
Burn burn the hate that gets you through
Burn burn for us for them for you

Luco El Loco

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29th Aug 2004 at 3:05 pm

Luco El Loco - Now a Born Again Trekkie

Now a Born Again Trekkie

 
Quote: Scarred_by_truth_
plain and simple for those of us who cant be bothered to concentrate
straight to the point

I find them almost completely the opposite!  I quite like the first, and I think the second has some good moments, although it does confuddle me, but that's not a bad thing.  

Little Blue Fox.

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31st Aug 2004 at 10:51 am

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"A hatful of sky".

A hatful of sky
falls into eager eyes
all that i know
distorted by tomorrow
hopeful rainbow soul
blossoms whispered dreams
always excited
our elusive futures.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

Little Blue Fox.

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31st Aug 2004 at 10:53 am

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"spooky poem".

A cold breeze
whips through the trees
shaking the leaves
that nobody sees
black broken branches
reaching
like bitter witches
teaching
in the darkness soon
of a fractured moon.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

Little Blue Fox.

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31st Aug 2004 at 10:55 am

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"Wilow".

willow
why do i weep so
find release in my fears
i wish i could
freedom surounds
though lost and
not yet found
hopeful for any sound
but still like you
weeping
waiting.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

Luco El Loco

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31st Aug 2004 at 11:04 am

Luco El Loco - Now a Born Again Trekkie

Now a Born Again Trekkie

 
That's a cool one David: Quote:
"A hatful of sky".

ANBY v3.0

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1st Sept 2004 at 1:57 pm

ANBY v3.0 - Officially female according to Pamplemeese Decree.

Officially female according to Pamplemeese Decree.

 
I like how the rhyme scheme in "Spooky Poem" accelerates the rhythm of the reading. It's also quite interesting how you use really short lines in different ways.
Rupert didn't win the Best Signature Award. He does not exist.

Little Blue Fox.

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29th Sept 2004 at 11:04 am

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"Haelwyn the book"

-Throwing stones inthe water,
tiny ripples touch my soul,
like the water is,
just splinters of a whole,
blinded white emotions,
a faded star-lit sky,
whispering fractured memories,
falling inwards to try,
soon a clear night,
just beyond my sight.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

Little Blue Fox.

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11th Oct 2004 at 9:17 am

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"True love waits".

-My fickering ghost heart,
dusty attic dreams,
wavering in the night,
under hopeful beams,
faded moonlight writes,
the truth inside my soul,
a fluttering frailty,
growing between our hearts,
happy smiles in the dark,
where my true love starts.

It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.

Big nose strikes again

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11th Oct 2004 at 10:33 am

 
theyre pretty. i like them.
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Little Blue Fox.

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5th Nov 2004 at 11:30 am

Little Blue Fox. - Hope is important.

Hope is important.

 
"Untitled".

-Looking through the trees
gently falling leaves
within open eyes
my careful heart sees
tomorrow's hidden dreams.



It hurts too much not to try.
I will see you in another life when we are both cats.
Quod perditum est, in venietur.*Facebook.


 
 
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